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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33541
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Saving money is a good for student I can not agree with the opinion that save money can not make us become a smart consumers. Obbisity, as a student, first of all you should learn how to save money in your daily life. Through the saving money behaviour then people can know well on you that you are a intelligence person. Because when you choose buy something the first step you will make a plan. For example, i want to buy a new shoe. I will compare the price between on line and off line, also the shoe quality. Fistly, i observe the taobao shoe shop if have the coupon or discount activity or not, when i know the jingpin shoe shop have the double eleven discount activity, i add the shoe that i want into the shopping basket, then wait for the pricing down then will buy it. The same situation,if the off line shop hold on the season exchange activity, maybe i will buy on the shop. Of course, at the end of the comparison, i bought the shoe on the taobao shop.Because under the same quality shoe situation. And save more than 100 yuan than off line. The 100 yuan can buy some cakes then share with my friends. From the case people can get the useful information, that saving money is full of sense. Saving money clever more than spend much money to buy the same quality shoe. Maybe some people will come up with this thoughts, spend much money can buy a unique shoe, can be different from others. But this is no sense. On the contant, you just like a silly consumer.

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