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Saving money is a good for student I can not agree with the opinion that save money can not make us become a smart consumers. Obbisity, as a student, first of all you should learn how to save money in your daily life. Through the saving money behaviour then people can know well on you that you are a intelligence person. Because when you choose buy something the first step you will make a plan. For example, i want to buy a new shoe. I will compare the price between on line and off line, also the shoe quality. Fistly, i observe the taobao shoe shop if have the coupon or discount activity or not, when i know the jingpin shoe shop have the double eleven discount activity, i add the shoe that i want into the shopping basket, then wait for the pricing down then will buy it. The same situation,if the off line shop hold on the season exchange activity, maybe i will buy on the shop. Of course, at the end of the comparison, i bought the shoe on the taobao shop.Because under the same quality shoe situation. And save more than 100 yuan than off line. The 100 yuan can buy some cakes then share with my friends. From the case people can get the useful information, that saving money is full of sense. Saving money clever more than spend much money to buy the same quality shoe. Maybe some people will come up with this thoughts, spend much money can buy a unique shoe, can be different from others. But this is no sense. On the contant, you just like a silly consumer.