小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；文中从句使用不丰富；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I have a girl friend,she is my good friend.she has a black hair, big eyes and red mouth.we first meet in study english class at three years ago .The end study we togeter go home on a daily baise. she likes eat a lot of fruites,but she isn't fat.she likes travle , she have been going to much more city.