小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

my friend I have a girl friend,she is my good friend. She has a black hair, big eyes and red mouth. We first meet in study English class at three years ago . The end of study we together goes home on a daily basis. She likes to eat a lot of fruit,but she isn't fat. She likes travel and she has been going to much more city. .