托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

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In my opinion, knowledge is none business with age, we should not give up learning whether we are old or not, I think we should know that we improve ourselves by learning. Many people in this generation thought that they will not get a degree because they are old and it is shame for them to go back to shcool. For instance, in our college, there are a lot of students traveled around the world for few years and when they finished their journey, they came back to the school and continue their school work, Although their classmates who had got the degree for few years ago, they still didn't give up to get a degree, because they want learn more and expereince more to improve themselfes, It is normal for them to do so. In generally, getting a degree is a important form of to prove yourself, so never giving up to get a degree, and there is nothing shame about u getting older, no one care about it at all.