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There were a lot of trees in my hometown, especially in the summer, presented a large piece of green sea in my eyes, we felt very cool but not hot. It was very clear and transparent for fish to live in the river, the house was very simple and the street was narrow, people lived a simply life in the past. Two decades past, with the highspeed developement of society, there are many buildings and factories standing in our hometown, all kinds of cars driving in the street, the environment have been ruinning with the developement of industry, such as cut down the trees, there isn't any fish in the river at all, variety polutions are very serious, we can't breath flesh air, so we need to take a series steps to protect our environment that is very urgent because there is only one earth for our human beings.