高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，但从句稍微偏少；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

There were a lot of trees in my hometown, especially in the summer, presented a large piece of green sea in my eyes, we felt very cool but not hot. It was very clear and transparent for fish to live in the river, the house was very simple and the street was narrow, people lived a simply life in the past. Two decades past, with the highspeed development of society, there are many buildings and factories standing in our hometown, all kinds of cars driving in the street, the environment has been ruining with the development of industry, such as cut down the trees, there isn't any fish in the river at all, variety polutions are very serious, we can't breath flesh air, so we need to take a series step to protect our environment that is very urgent for us because there is only one earth for our human beings.