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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22875
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

My hometown There were a lot of trees in my hometown, especially in the summer, presented a large piece of green sea in my eyes, we felt very cool but not hot. It was very clear and transparent for fish to live in the river, the house was very simple and the street was narrow, people lived a simply life in the past. Two decades past, with the highspeed development of society, there are many buildings and factories standing in our hometown, all kinds of cars driving in the street, the environment has been ruining with the development of industry, such as cut down the trees, there isn't any fish in the river at all due to the dirty water, variety pollution is becoming more and more serious, we can't breath flesh air, so we need to take a series step to protect our environment that is very urgent for us because there is only one earth for our human beings.

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