单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl.She has a long hair.I am go to school every day playing with she,She has a good singing. My favorite food is rice,and she's favorite food is green tea.On sunday we both like go to the play ground and play basketball.