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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;文章组织结构良好。

用户练习作文:

Communication is universal in our daily life. It's also significant during the whole act of medical treatment. As a medical student, my dream is to be an outstanding doctor who possesses transcendent medical technology as well as wonderful communication skills. However, I have been inarticulate since I was a child. Indeed I could hardly make a good communication with my mom. I had been handed across different families to be looked after for many years before I came back living with my parents. Everything is strange to me including my mom. Things went worse after my mom was diagnosed with cancer. A trifle such as forgetting to close the door could ignite her and cause a fierce quarrel between us and ending in a fiercely beating on me. These memories sent me a chill to my heart and made me reduce the opportunity to communicate with her. It has changed since I learned a course, Tumor Rehabilitation Medicine. The course introduced the mental crisis and abnormal behavior of tumor patients even taught how to communicate with them as a doctor or a family member. When the course was over, I made a three hours long telephone call to my mom immediately. It was the most wonderful communication experience in my life, the first time I open my mind to my mom. The misunderstanding between us disappeared just like dark clouds go with the mild wind. This experience gave me infinite power and inspired my potential to communicate with patients. During the year I learned in clinic, I grasped every chance to observe my teachers how to be faced with different kinds of patients and their family members, then cerebrated and practiced as many times as I could. One day, a tumor patient talked to me:" No one even my attending physician knows what I want to express except you. Are you truly just a medical student?" This is the most wonderful approval,Right? It makes me firmly believe I will become the doctor I want to be. I can't express how grateful I am to the experience I started to communicate with my mom.

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