2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown ,I will take him to the confusic temple.This is a very famous temple in JI’AN .It is build in four handerd years ago ,many people come here to see confusic .And the other place is Eastern tower ，It is build in three years ago .now ,it have been protected very well.