2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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There are no denying that the fact that the goods of excessive package are filled with our market .Although the associated government accliam that it is not advised to over pack.With the sociality developed,more and more people pay great attention to the gift how exquistive paked .on yhe one hand,one may attracted by the commmodities with good looking ,on the other hand , AS far as i am concerned,i am in favor of the idea that the best wish add the nomal goods choosed or worked from botom one's heart are great.So we can't take much time on how to pake well .