托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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It doesn't matter whether you live in rural area or cosmopolitan area, what important is depending on your own demands. Everyone has his own demands which determine his choices in living. I think living in cities is a better decision. First, the infrastructure is more complete in urban areas. We all need to go to work, go to school, buy commodities in supermarket,etc.The traffic in city is more convenient than in suburb and where there are more big markets. It seems like we can get enough resource we want more easily. Second, the labor market is broader to job hunters and the educational chances are more accessible to students in cities. Students always need better study environments. For example, Children are sent by their parents to urban schools in order to have a better development, the same as seeking jobs. Third, cities are bigger than rural areas in every aspect. People need to be at a bigger place so that they can have a wider horizon. Do you want to stay at a small countryside forever? We need to face more excellent people. Fierce competitions bring stresses but also dynamics. All in all, choices are in your own hands.