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2006年专八英语作文真题:Ambition

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:01浏览次数:3429
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题目 Ambition
说明 Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life we decide that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do but no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about do you agree or disagree with him?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

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As the famous writer Joseph Epstein once said, it is what we aspire for that decides that our life and I can't agree more with him. We make a lot of decisions in our life, and at the end of the day, we eat what we sow. Being ambitious in our daily life is good for us in leading an well-organized life. The beauty of being ambitious manifest itself in short term and long term. Being ambitious or put in another word, setting a relatively high goal, can make you avoid being at sea in your life and know what to do in the next step. You know what to pursue and in the course of going after the target, you improve yourself and finally get a sense of accomplishment. In the long term, when the goals are achieved one by one, you will find that your life standard is getting higher and higher. The changes may be unnoticeable in the very beginning and during the course. But the outcome of pursuit will turn out satisfactory as you look back at the path that you have gone through.

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