新东方托福高分作文:成功与运气有关吗?

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Those who think that people succeed is because of hard work might say that luck has nothing to do with success. However, I disagree with this statement that people succeed has nothing with luck. There're two major aspects:chance and luck can give you benefit. Firstly, a person's success can not leave chance, so if you are a lucky person, you will get a lot of chance. In a sense, it is true that success is caused by hard work, but luck can make people become success faster. For example, you are a lucky person and you want to be success, you will get a lot of chance to be success. It is why i think luck is very important for a person. Moreover, luck can give you more benefit than your competitors. For example, in this employment difficult society, go to a big company is very difficult. so if you are a lucky person, you can be more easier go to a big company. In summary, I think a lucky person is easier to be a success people.