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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec. 2th6th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hobnail,tom Subject: To establish business relationships Dear : My name is HuBin，From Apple phone company.l learn about to your company new product number is 5670 form December 15th to 22 in New York during the exhibition.l very interesiting it,Please you gave to a price list and instuction. Thank you,l hope we to establish business relationship.
