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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-23 22:10浏览次数:14155
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说明:假定你是胡斌,根据下列内容写一封邮件。 
发信人E-mail地址:hubin@163.com 
收信人E-mail地址:KPOHsales@hotmail.com 

内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。

【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
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文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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Everyone that just comes to college has lots of thought with expectations and hopes. Me too. Of course, we all want to be surrounded by great resources: a comprehensive library, great sports facilities and student organizations. That will be the period where you go from teacher-taught to master-inspired, after which we will be self-learner! In my opinion, we will have the freedom to explore and learn what we want. First, we do not be too utilitarian to learn something interesting. And then, the future is built on a strong foundation of the past! So, let us try our best to do anything! Please do not be worried. Grades are just silly letters that give the vain people something to brag and lazy people something to fear. For example, if you think you love someone, tell her. You have very little to lose! Finally, enjoy myself and get along well with others. Enjoy picking your dots, and be assured one day you will find your calling, and connect a beautiful curve through the dots!

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