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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
As proverb said, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. So, when we make our choices, just thingking carefully.The world is full of danger that someone affraid it. On the one hand, we should release the risk of decision. When we make a vital problem, a part of people lose their direction. They make a unlucky choice that they have to pay much they can't afford. To these people, a number of "intellegent people " advise them don't put all eggs in one basket. On the other hand, a part of expert reckon that when we make our choices ,be careful. Cultivation to the mind is as nesseary as the food to the mind. Some mistakes we can afford it. Just do anything carefully and keep rational thingking that can reduce the false. In my words, I agree the second option. We couldn't know when,where and what problem we face.Do best ourselves, to reduce the risk. Sometimes, giving our only one choice,just make our best choice.
