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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40866
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇的使用还有很大提升空间;从句使用量不足。

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Nowadays,may people believe their eyes to see and find what happen and get the conclusion about something instantly.But our eyes will cheat ourselves which we cannot watch the whole thing 's happening. As for me,when you see or hear something and then draww the conclusion at once ,that is unwise which we get the wrong conclusion.It seems like the experiment isn't ended and you think that must be faise,so embarrassed and stupid.People also think the Edison would not invent the electronic light when his experiment about the lights.But at last,because of his invention,our darkness were gone forever.Einstein also was thought a stupid kid when he only just a child,but he had become the greatest physicist in the world until today. So,don't get the present conclusion when you see the things happening from youe eyes.The facts will cheat your mind and change your determination about yourself.We should acknowledge the facts from many aspects and different people.We should study more and never stop learning hard.

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