文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。
Nowadays,may people believe their eyes to see and find what happen and get the conclusion about something instantly.But our eyes will cheat ourselves which we cannot watch the whole thing 's happening. As for me,when you see or hear something and then draw the conclusion at once ,that is unwise which we get the wrong conclusion.It seems like the experiment isn't ended and you think that must be false,so embarrassed and stupid.People also think the Edison would not invent the electronic light when his experiment about the lights.But at last,because of his invention,our darkness were gone forever.Einstein also was thought a stupid kid when he only just a child,but he had become the greatest physicist in the world until today. So,don't get the present conclusion when you see the things happening from your eyes.The fact will cheat your mind and change your determination about yourself.We should acknowledge the facts from different aspects and different people.We should study more and never stop learning hard.
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