过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活。
With the advent of the internet that affected on our life deeply and a lot of sides, especially on interpersonal communication that is obvious. In this generation, more and more people communicate on internet and they usually talk less in reality and they even didn't talk to their family when they have meal together. There is an advertisement that shows that since of the internet people text each other rather than talk even though the people who they communicate with are by themselves. It described that situation which internet made us far away from each other if we don't use it correctly. It's true that internet made human life more covenience and effective, but in my view, if we depend on it too much that will make human lazy and loss our ability to solve problem by ourselves and end up we will bacome the slave of internet. In general, it is important to us to use the internet suitable and we should not depend on it so much unless we really need it.
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