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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the advent of the internet that affected on our life deeply and a lot of sides, especially on interpersonal communication that is obvious. In this generation, more and more people communicate on internet and they usually talk less in reality and they even didn't talk to their family when they have meal together. There is an advertisement that shows that since of the internet people text each other rather than talk even though the people who they communicate with are by themselves. It described that situation which internet made us far away from each other if we don't use it correctly. It's true that internet made human life more convenient and effectively, but in my view, if we depend on it too much that will make human lazy and loss our ability to solve problems by ourselves and end up we will become the slave of internet. In general, it is important for us to use the internet suitable and we should not depend on it so much unless we really need it.

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