2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者使用词汇表达不够灵活，需要多使用一些高级词汇。

The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China.The Mid-Autumn Festival is on the 15th September.It has been a long time,when Chinese start to celebrate it.On this festival,people gather together with their family members and share with their exciting experience.They also eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon,they think it's neccessary to get together with their family.People also make a tour with family members or visit a friend of themselves.