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I am a learner. I think one of the most outstanding strengths that I have is the ability to learn from others. I can always find someone's merits, select and utilize them, which means anyone can be my teacher. The Yale Young Global Scholar can offer a chance to meet a group of excellent peers around the world and lecturers who are successful in their field. These people are mobile treasure for me due to their countless merits that can benefit me. Therefore, this chance to study with them is the most attractive to me, which I have been looking forward to.