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句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；全文结构较为严谨。
I have the pleasure to tell you that I became a freshman. And in the past few weeks, I had enjoyed special college life. First of all, unlike our high school teacher said, the college life is very tight. You will find it hard to believe, but to get bachelor's degree we need to get various certificates. Certainly, we have enough spare time, however, we can’t waste a minute or even a second. Second, the college life is completely independent. Every difficulty we meet should be handled by ourselves, or, we can ask friends or teachers for help. And all of these can cultivate our independent personality. Besides, I have experienced my first interview, and finally becoming a member of “Self-Management Community”. By the way, I felt very nervous, even I couldn’t speak a word frequently at that time. Nevertheless, I think it gives me some hints that would be useful for my future’s job interview. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. I hope you can overcome any difficulties on your way.
