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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力。
I have the pleasure to tell you how special college I have enjoyed in the past few weeks. First of all, unlike our high school teacher said, the college life is very tight so much. You would find it hard to believe, but to get bachelor's degree we must obtain various certificates. Of course, we have enough spare time; however, a minute or even a second can’t be wasted. Second, college life is totally different from high school. In my view, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with should be handled by ourselves. Certainly, all these experiences can cultivate our independent personality. Finally, I have experienced my first interview; fortunately, I finally become a member of “Self-Management Community”. By the way, I felt very nervous, even I couldn’t speak a word frequently at that time. Nevertheless, I think it gives me many hints that would lay a solid foundation for my future’s job interview. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. I firmly believe you can also conquer all difficulties!
