采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。
I have the pleasure to tell you that I became a freshman. In the past few weeks, I had enjoyed special college life. First of all, unlike our high school teacher said, college life is very tight so much. You would find it hard to believe, but to get bachelor's degree we must obtain various certificates. Of course, we have enough spare time; however, a minute or even a second can’t be wasted. Second, college life is totally different from high school. In my view, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with should be handled by ourselves. Certainly, all these experiences can cultivate our independent personality. Finally, I have gone for my first interview; fortunately, I finally become a member of “Self-Management Community”. Incidentally, I felt very nervous, even I couldn’t speak a word frequently at that time. Nevertheless, I think it gives me many hints that would lay a solid foundation for my future’s job interview. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. I firmly believe you can also conquer all difficulties!