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句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays, university is no longer a fresh word to people. Many teenagers choose to enter university only to accumulate knowledge. However, I think universities can bring us more. First of all, I think universities are the society's epitome. We can learn various social skills which are essential to find a satisfying job. Even a man has a large stock of information; the lack of social skills would make him miss the golden chance. Secondly, attending university enables us in touch with the newest science and technology. With the progress of the times, appeared a lot of new technologies, which promote the development of society. As a member of society, understanding them is necessary. Finally, university is a platform where we can cultivate our independent personality. When we stay in university, we have no alternative but to process everything by ourselves. This period may be difficult and restless, but everything is going to be all right. Then we can authentically grow up. In conclusion, only by undergoing more challenges and toils can we cultivate strong personality and ability.
