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句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
I have the pleasure to tell you that I became a freshman. In the past few weeks, I had enjoyed a colorful college life. First of all, unlike high school teacher said, college life is actually very tight. You would find it hard to believe, but to get bachelor's degree we must obtain various certificates. Of course, we have enough spare time; however, a minute or even a second can’t be wasted. Second, college life is totally different from high school. In my view, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with should be handled by ourselves. Certainly, all these experiences can cultivate our independent personality. Incidentally, I have gone for my first interview; fortunately, I finally become a member of “Self-Management Community”. During the interview, I felt extremely nervous; even I couldn’t speak a word frequently. Nevertheless, I think it gives me many hints that would lay a solid foundation for my future’s interview. As the proverb goes, “When the going gets tough, the tough gets going.” I firmly believe you can also conquer all difficulties!
