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作者词汇表达恰当，同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Nowadays, having a car becomes easy. People agrees that vehicle is convenient, comfortable, fast transportation. It also represents that resident enhances the standard of life and wealth. The amount of car sales is not only raising the car industry, it is also enhancing other industry such as parking industry, car's instrument industry. However, some groups of people disagrees that makes a huge air pollution problem. If people drives out a lot of cars in one city, it affect transportation problem and more accident happened. Every driver drive out their own car out, which increases a parking problem.
