2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(94):来中国旅行

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Dear Peter, I'm really excited to know that you'll come to China for summer holidays. I hope you will come to visit my hometown. On the one hand,if you are going to my hometown,you should use the transport of plane or train.What’more, airport has the 45 bus and go off in the last station.On the other hand，if you take the train, I will wait for you in the station.In addition, when I meet you,I will get along with you to visit the island to relaxing.For example,swimming,running and climbing.In addition,I will bring you to eating sea food. In the end, I think we will make a wonderful memory if the day comes. Let me know your travel plan when you have one. I'm looking forward to seeing you again, in my hometown.