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I have the pleasure to tell you that I became a freshman. In the past few weeks, I had fancied a colorful college life. First of all, unlike formal teachers said, college life is actually very tight. You would find it hard to believe, but to get bachelor's degree we must obtain various certificates. Due to the enough spare time we have, we must run against time. Second, college life is totally the society's epitome. In my view, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with should be handled by ourselves. It is these experiences that cultivate our independent personality. Incidentally, I have gone for my first interview. Fortunately, I finally become a member of “Self-Management Community”. During the progress, I felt extremely nervous; even I couldn’t speak frequently. Nevertheless, I think it gives me many hints that would lay a solid foundation for my job interview. As the proverb goes, “when the going gets tough, the tough gets going.” Only by undergoing more challenges and toils can we cultivate strong personality and capability.
