2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

With the development of economy and science,more and more people use the computer in common so that it will become more important in our life.We can't imagine that if one day we left the computer which how boring of our life will be?.That's to say,it's necessary for everyone, the computer and our life are closely linked. Have to admit that computer as a most important role in our life.maybe you can say,it is a teacher that is why it can teach our something instead of we can't know from the real life.I believe that when we have two opportunity,one of them we can choose get a chance to ask somebody and the balance is through the computer,more than half would be choose the last one.In fact,it is more convenience for us,computer make our life more simple and shortcut,writing ,reading,searching,any you want to do,computer will help you,in anywhere. However,Most of it is advantage for us,meanwhile it is bad for us,that is reason for computer make people lazy,people used to it and is depend on.So,when we use it we shoule relize that.Computer is our partner,it can not to become ourselves in any day.