从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear David I am very glad to receive your letter. How is everthing going? In your letter, you told me that you will come to Lan Zhou, China to study Chinese. You also have asked me about the methods and approaches of Chinese learning. In fact, I indeed have some suggestions for your near-to-come studying. Firstly, you can speak more Chinese with local people, which can help your oral Chinese a lot. Secondly, you can read some papers and articles written in Chinese.By doing that, it wil greatly improve your ablity of reading Thirdly, you can travel around when you are not busy. Chinese culture is really fasinating for most foreigners. I believe you will be fall in love with this amazing culture and enjoy your life in China. Looking forward to see you in Lan Zhou soon.