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新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达(2):给大卫的一封信

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:58浏览次数:2959
要求:
根据汉语提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。

   假设你叫陈泉,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到兰州来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
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从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Dear David I am very glad to receive your letter. How is everthing going? In your letter, you told me that you will come to Lan Zhou, China to study Chinese. You also have asked me about the methods and approaches of Chinese learning. In fact, I indeed have some suggestions for your near-to-come studying. Firstly, you can speak more Chinese with local people, which can help your oral Chinese a lot. Secondly, you can read some papers and articles written in Chinese.By doing that, it wil greatly improve your ablity of reading Thirdly, you can travel around when you are not busy. Chinese culture is really fasinating for most foreigners. I believe you will be fall in love with this amazing culture and enjoy your life in China. Looking forward to see you in Lan Zhou soon.

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