2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇比较灵活，还要请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential of public interaction.With out trust,there is nothing should be leave behind in our interpersonal relationships.On the contrary,for the individual,we are able to build up a more intimate friendship with others as absolute trust we have.