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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396[网页划词已开启]
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇使用熟练,但拼写错误要注意;全文结构较为严谨。

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As we all known, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket, which the basket fall down will make the damage become the biggest at once. On the contrary, if we consider something from many different aspects, our abilities of consideration will be improved. As for me, puting all the eggs in one basekt is a very stupid business. It will improve the difficulties to protect the eggs in the basket and it will cause the loss which we can't invest the other baskets. One-sided investment will cause the unbalance in the market economy. In addition, many-sided investment can get more earnings from different investments which can weaken the difficulties of the invests on the certain extent. To sum up, it is dangerous to invest all money into one investment. We should consider more about the investment's many aspects of risks which can lower the loss of our economies.Puting some eggs in different baskets will bring more earnings to ourselves in our life.

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