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As we all know, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket, which the basket fall down will make the damage become the biggest at once. On the contrary, if we consider something from many different aspects, our abilities of consideration will be improved. As for me, putting all the eggs in one basket is a very silly business. It can improve the difficulties to protect the eggs in the basket from economic crisis and it will cause the losses which we can't invest the other baskets. One-sided investment will cause the unbalance in the market economy. In addition, many-sided investment can get more earnings from different investments which can weaken the difficulties of the investments on the certain extent. To sum up, it is dangerous to invest all money into one investment. We should consider more about the investment's many aspects of risks which can decrease the loss of our economies. Puting some eggs in different baskets will bring more earnings to ourselves in our life.
