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Nowadays we are in a fast world.More and more people like speaking when they see something.However,it's not a smart conduct. In my opinion,we should do after thinking at least three times.The reason why I say is that many things are not like we see but different from it.The truth behind the thing may be complex,it needs us to discover it. For instence,when we see a begger in the street,we will see him as a weak or disabled person.But when a police carry him to prison,we will find it unbelivable that he is a lier.From the thing,we can get a conclusion that we should think about what we see more and more because what we see or hear are false many times.
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