2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of economy and science,more and more people use the computer in common so that it will become more important in our life.We can't imagine that if one day we left the computer which how boring of our life will be?.That's to say,it's necessary for everyone, the computer and our life are closely linked. Have to admit that the computer as a most important role in our life.Maybe,it is a teacher that is why it can teach our something when we can't know from the real life.I believe that when we have a opportunity to ask somebody help and the balance is through the computerto help us,more than half would be choose the last one.In fact,it is more convenience for us,computer make our life more simple and shortcut,writing,reading,searching,any you want to do,computer will help you,anywhere,anytime.The computer like a close friend. However,Most of it is advantage for us,meanwhile it is bad for us,that is reason for computer make people idle,people used to it and depend on it.So,when we use it and we should realize that.Computer is our partner,therefore it cannot become ourselves in any day.