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句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。
I hear that you will go to my hometown ,I feel very hounor for it.It says : He who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man in china ,ye there are my town in Beijing ,which is capital in china. Beijing is best city in the world ,It has very long and abundant curtures.Beijing attracts all kind of people for the fifferent counturies .why it very fantistic? Now I will tell you resons Not only Beijing has many ancient buildings but also has is has great wall,alleyways and intresting Beijing opera,in addition,there are the imperial place Tian An Men .. I love my hometown ,I see you do it ,so I very hope you visit here and as same as love it.
