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I hear that you will go to my hometown ,I feel honour for it.It says :he who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man in China ,ye there is my town in Beijing ,which is capital in China. Beijing is best city in the world ,it has very long and abundant curtures.Beijing attracts all kind of people for the different countries .why it very fantastic? Now I will tell you reasons Not only Beijing has many ancient buildings but also has is has great wall,alleyways and intresting Beijing opera,in addition,there are the imperial place . I love my hometown ,I see you do it ,so I hope you visit here as same as love it.
