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句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；文中高级词汇不足；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
I hear that you will go to my hometown ,I feel honour for it.It says :he who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man in China ,ye there is my town in Beijing ,which is capital in China. Beijing is best city in the world ,it has very long and abundant curtures.Beijing attracts all kinds of people for the different countries .why it attracts most of people. Now I will tell your reasons. Not only Beijing has many ancient buildings but also has is has great wall,alleyways and interesting Beijing opera,in addition,there are the imperial place . I love my hometown ,I see you do it ,so I hope you visit here as same as love it .
