托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。

I think that people who with an odinary talent and extraodinary perseverance is the strongerest in the world, this kind of person always like this that told less and do more, they don't announce what they will do and what they could do. It acctually happend to our life frecequently, I know a person who is older than me, he dicided to go to aboard and he is a normal person like us, he even not good at English so much, and all of the people around he don't think that he will pass the English test, but all of us were wrong that at the end up he got a high score in the test, when we asked him how he made it come true that the answer is that he perseverance to learn English everyday in the past two years and he also worked very hard that he got up early and stay out late everyday to learn English, and he said that he made his dream come true step by step and now he thought he can do everything and nothing is impossible to him. Perseverance makes people stronger and understands the truth that where there is a will, there is a way.