2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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The online shopping has been very popular nowadays.With the updates of the technology and the internet,it seems like that we can shop online anytime anywhere.Even my grandma asked me how to do the online shopping. As we know,with the online shopping our lives have been very convenience.We don't need to go out and spend a lot of time to searching for one shirt or something.If we do this online,it just takes a few minutes.And most of time shopping online could be much cheaper than shopping in a mall.Even though online shopping can save time and money,it also causes some problems.Sometimes we may get things with bad qualities,and some people may be addicted to shopping online with which could make them spend much more money than they really have to. I think online shopping is good for us,but we suppose to do it rationally.It will be great if we could take the advantages of online shopping and avoid the disadvantages of it.