文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者在句法层面做的很棒;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Dear John, I am very glad to know that you want to invite me to your home for dinner. However, I am very sorry that I can not go and eat with you. I have to prepare for an important examination the day after tomorrow, and you know what does this mean for me. Actually, it is a pity that I can not eat with you. Though I can not eat with you, I do hope you can enjoy your time and have a good day. If you do not mind about it, can we go out together after finishing the exam?