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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富多样,高级词汇使用较熟练。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, more and more people like judging a person by their appearance rather than their activities inthe heart and mind. Many individuals prefer the appearance of the person, too. Furthermore, they much like the handsome boys and girls which have beautiful appearance and active activities and humor. But as for me, it is unwise and silly to judge a person by their appearance. The appearance of the people is just a characteristic of the person's face, which doesn't represent the whole ethics of the people. What's more, there are many people who have the active activities and great ideals in the world, we can't judge the person who doesn't have the great appearance won't change this world where we are living in. A pretty appearance can't represent the person. But at the meanwhile, an ugly face can't represent the wisdom of the people. To summarize, we should think about the man many aspects about its ethics and activities which not just for the appearance. Undoubtedly, it is smart and fantastic to mak friends which you have forgotten these people's appearance.

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