2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results. 50% students feel that they have too much homeword and pressure. 30% students feel that their parents hardly request to them and less chat wile them. 20% students feel lack of activity and person is poor. I think schools need to hold so many activity as every before and less make students to finish homewords and release students's presure.