托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力。

Many mid-age people around me often say "How I wish I could learn more when I was young." Also, my father's biggist dream is having chance to go to college. Nowadays, we have the chance, the ability and money, then why do we give up? First, the most important is that studying is something continuing. We can not only consider study as a specific purpose, but also consider it as a good habit. When we get older, we may be busy with all kinds of stuff, we can study in our spare time though. In my college dormitory, there is an aunt, who is responsible for the management of us, is taking part in the elderly university. She is busy with the student stuff every day, but we can always see her read when she is free. Second, I think elderly people got through everything when they were in a young age, either the happy time or the tough situation. They won't put materials on the first position. As a result, spiritual satisfaction is so important to them, isn't it? Study is such a thing which can create a lot of things. You can learn something related to your daily life. You can also get a mutual understanding in the sea of knowledge. Third, we can establish an example to your sons, daughters or the next generations if we persevere in studying. This spirit is really precious. We can enrich ourselves and motivate others at the same time through our perspiration and persistent attitude, why don't we study forever?