新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者使用词汇表达不够灵活，需要多使用一些高级词汇；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

Dear David, I heard you are coming to China soon. I am glad to be with travl in China. You told me you plan to learn Chinese, I think I can be your teacher. If you want to learn Chinese better, you had better try your best and communicate with local people. You can try to read Chinese newspaper and watching news on television, you can also know more Chinese friends. I believe that through the efforts, you will be able to learn Chinese well.