单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少。
I have a good friend whose named Kumamon. He's a big black bear from Japan. He's fat and cute, I love him so much. He is good at dancing. Once he was dancing there is always full of laughing. He always bring the smile to us. He is very famous in Japan.