高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

从句数量偏少；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

My hometown is in the southwest of China. It has a beautiful name---ChongQing. I was born in this big city, I think it's more beautiful than where I live now. My hometown has lots of trees, so the air is very clean. My grandparents live on the mountain. So it's more healthy for them. Before I born, ChongQing was an important place in the civil war. Because there has one place, it is a very famous jail named Zhazidong.In here, lots of Revolutionary Martyrs dead in this prison. But now this place is just like a museum, people from everywhere to see this old jail. And there are lots of high buildings build on here.